Jumat, 06 Maret 2009

About My Beautiful Sister


             

                  Assalaamualaikum Wr. Wb..

         Hello friend,,,,,

              In the first i am finish tell about me now i want to tell about my sister....

              Her name's Ellyne Siska Irlianti, you can call her Ellyne/siska. She was born in Tuban at 10 July 1989. So that, she is twenty years old now. She is a University Student of ITS ( Institut Tekhnologi Sepuluh November). She is in the her university as a lecture asisstant and join in auto sport organitation. Her weight is 55 kg and her height is 161 cm. Her hobby is wash up, playing basket ball, playing volly ball, watching TV, and etc. Her idea is become a doctor, but it not reach.

             She is in the first of two sisters. Her favourite colour is pink, purple, orange, and blue.

Her fauvorite food is vegetables. Her favourite drink is ice orange. She has white skin, straigh hair, black eye, propotional body. She is verykind to all people and very beautiful.....

Thanks!

                                 Wassalaamualaikum Wr. Wb

9 komentar:

  1. Assalamualaikum.....!!!!!!!
    Hello...Dian,your writing is very good, but in paragraph 3 you write "black eye" actually "black eyes"
    Wassalam.....!!!!!!!!!

    BalasHapus
  2. Assalmualaikum...
    hello...Dian...
    your posting 2 is good...
    and photo in your blog is beautiful...
    Wassalamualaikum...

    BalasHapus
  3. azzkuuuum.......
    Hello you write is good but the colour of the text make me difficulty to read
    thankzzzz
    wazzalam.........

    BalasHapus
  4. azkum
    you write is good but in paragraph 5 you write fauvorite be right is favourite
    thanks
    wzzzzz.

    BalasHapus
  5. Askum...
    yoyr writing and your blog is very good, and your sister is very beautiful!!!
    wassalam...

    BalasHapus
  6. Assalamu'alaikum
    your blog is good and very, but in paragraph 2 your write " Her hobby is wash up, playing basket ball, playing volly ball, watching TV, and etc " Actually " Her hobby are wash up , playing basket ball, playing volly ball, watching TV , and etc "
    OK....!!! Thanks ....!!!
    wassalamu'alaikum

    BalasHapus
  7. Askum....
    Your writing is G..O..O..D..!!! But in paragraph 2 you write "She is a University student of ITS (Institut Tekhnologi Sepuluh November), Actually " She is an University student of ITS (Institut Teknologi Sepuluh November).
    THANKS..!!!!
    Waskum....

    BalasHapus
  8. Assalamualaikum....
    Dian, your writing is very good..and your sister is beautiful.. But you write "her favourite colour" actually "her favourite color"
    Thanks....
    Wassalam....

    BalasHapus
  9. Assalamulaikum....
    Hai Dian.... yuor write is good, but in paragraph four, your write " black eye" actually " black eyes" and your write " a Uneversity Student of ITS" actually " She is an University Student of Student ITS.
    Wassalamualikum....

    BalasHapus